A Day at the Lake

by Rachelle Loya
(McCamey,Texas)

Swish, swish goes the wind
next to the lake,
a wonderful sight.
Crish, crash go the waves
as I look at the water splash.

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gerrie your bff
by: Anonymous

your poem was awesome you should look at the peom i made for u it is called rachelle it is awesome like yours love you gerrie

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i<3JB!!!
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I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!

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a day at the lake
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i love it

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Awsome
by: luke

That put an image in my mind.

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