Autumn

by Carla Woodford
(Gillingham, Kent, England)

Leaves falling
Slowly from the trees
Landing gently
With the breeze
People walking
All around
Crunching leaves
Making a sound
Yellow and orange
For all to see
Autumn crunchy leaves

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wow
by: Anonymous

This is really good, well done. I can't wait to read more. Your going to go far.

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chat
by: Anthony

Oh WOW, i love this one even though its short its really good, fresh and fab, i can't wait to read more of your poems. I love the choice of words you use and it fits together perfectly as well, well done. I can see that you're going to go far.

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Appreciation and Expectation.
by: Anonymous

Well done.

A nice new way of looking at poetry.

Let's hope this is not the only one Carla has to offer.

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Appreciation and expectation.
by: Anonymous

What a nice, fresh poem form.

I hope there are many more to come from this talented new poet.

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yay
by: lou

love it

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