Changes

by Yeni Pratiwi
(Bekasi)

The world's getting blurred through the glass
It's getting wet and cold
And the time keeps spinning round
Faster
And what you doing?

Comments for Changes

Average Rating

Click here to add your own comments

Feb 26, 2015
Rating

Reply to Robert
by: Yeni Pratiwi

Dear Robert, thank you very much. I would be glad if you put this poem on your book ^^

Feb 09, 2015
Rating

CHANGES
by: Robert Henry Poulin

GOOD FOR YOU. A short to the point haiku style poem so nicely done. 10 stars. I am in process of writing a book on happiness: Zen, Shinto, and the Tao. I am selecting a few poets to include in my book and if you are interested in allowing your poem CHANGES, I would love to use it. There is no payment but I will give credit to the poet and place of publication. I will be selecting about 20 poets, I think yours fits nicely with my message.

Click here to add your own comments

Join in and write your own page! It's easy to do. How? Simply click here to return to Inspirational Poems.

Search Here for Poetry

Click here if you love us!