Chocolate Cake

by Rosie
(London)

I like chomping chcolate cake it's yummy,
I like biting chocolate cake,
And I love scoffing it in!
Lick, lick, lick the cake.

I like crunching chocolate cake,
I like munching chocolate cake,
Lick, lick, lick the cake.

Biting chocolate cake is fun,
Chocolate cake in my tum!

Age 6

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delicious
by: twr

We all want cake now !

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Truly Scrumptious
by: Julia

Well done Rosie, what a great poem. You have made me feel hungry!

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Truly Scrumptious
by: Julia

Well done Rosie, what a great poem. You have made me feel very hungry!

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Well done Rosie
by: Anonymous

Your poem has made me feel very hungry.

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Yum yum
by: Anonymous

Hey Rosie, this is great, well done.... I'm just off to buy some chocolate now!! X

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Scrummylicious!
by: Toni T

Wow, I love this poem, it makes me want to go eat some chocolate cake!!!
Well done Rosie! x

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