Circles

by Jordan Rebuck
(Raleigh, NC)


I am in the same spot that I've always been.

I feel like each move is a bigger sin.

I don't want to rot in this room where I lay.

I feel I've lost a little more each day.

What am I doing? What road should I take?

Will I always be wrong with each decision I make?

I'll be making the same circles again and again.

I am in the same spot that I've always been.

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Thank you
by: Jordan Rebuck

I am glad you all enjoyed! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and understand the thought behind it. :)

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Great.
by: Anonymous

You've summed up my multitudes of thoughts in a short piece right there. A splendid job, my friend.

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Only 5 stars because website doesn't allow more. :) faaaabulous!

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:)
by: Anonymous

I really love it! ;)
Makes me think about my life.

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check you out
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good job

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