Day Care

by Kiana Brown
(McCamey,Texas)

Colors on the wall,
almost like a clown.
Kids screaming.
Running and jumping as if
they were wild animals.
Toys being broken
like a tornado hit.
Soon as 12:00 hit,
they dropped like
a tree falling down.

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awesome
by: JovanniFalcon

You are best friend I love you

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:P
by: kiana Brown

i did do good hu

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hi
by: jessi

hii i like ur poem !

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cool
by: cotie

cool poem kiana

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greatjob
by: edith urias

nicejobkianailovethepoem

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nice
by: stefany

hey kiana your poem was off the hook great job.

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Woweeeeeee!
by: Nina

Sounds like my kiddos! This is so wonderful Kiana...nice job love!

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Talented indeed!!!
by: Charlie

Good work Kiona. Keep it up. Love you.

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Big sisters observation
by: Anonymous

Good work. I really liked the last part. Keep it up lady. Love you.

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Awesome
by: Tia Amanda

Wow you are a talented girl...very cool poem!

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Great Job
by: Tanika

Great job Kiana!!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!!!!

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Love you poem
by: Sonia

I love your poem. I love the words you used to express your view. Keep up the good work.

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Kiana
by: Aunt Sheena

Very Good Kiana
Keep Up The Good Work!!!!!

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Good job!
by: Sherril

Good job, Kiana. I can totally picture that at a daycare!

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good
by: christina79

Good job.

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