Dead Happy

by Jasmine
(Comer)

You see A girl so pretty, it's true
Dark hair, blue eyes but you don't see what's wrong
Behind her eyes so stunning she cries
If you saw past her smile you'd see a frown so deep you'd think it never ends

She's ashamed of her perfect body because of what has been done to it
Through rape and through fight,there's many scars she hides, but she's strong
Her long thick eyelashes whisper her story but all that guys hear is seduction
Not a virgin by force she gives away her virginity by choice

Abused and unloved she walks arm in arm with sorrow
In the small town of Baldwin she isn't alone, many people have stories like her own
For once she is the most popular girl and she is almost whole
She dates and is happy at school but her home-life isn't so good

She moves with a record she couldn't shake, so close from getting kicked out
She doesn't realize how much she is losing until she finds out she is leaving him
so lonely she sits at her home-school computer,only thinking of him
she looks through blinds that seem so much like prison bars, hoping he'll be here soon

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Oct 17, 2012
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the best
by: Anonymous

OMG greatest gothic poem of all time!!!

Jul 15, 2012
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:((
by: choki

this poem is outstanding...i couldn't stop myself from crying.Its a really heart touching poem.

Jul 05, 2012
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:-(
by: kaka

this is one of the best poem i've heard

Jun 16, 2012
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amazing
by: riley :,-(

this poem reflects soooo much of my life when i was reading it tears came to my eyes i felt as if u saw my life through ur eyes. though i do not call myself beautiful because of my scars it did match me completely.

May 07, 2012
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by: jasmine comer

thanks...writing is my way to get everything out. it's my story, and my life is like and endless tunnel not quite in the light yet.

Apr 29, 2012
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sorry
by: lucy

sorry about the first comment my friend put it on there, its good

Apr 07, 2012
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nice
by: lucy

love it sounds kinda like me but still love it!!!!!!

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