Find Me

by Caneel
(Maine, USA)

I am a normal, everyday girl
I go to school
I have friends
My life is normal

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I am hidden behind iron bars
I am stuck here for all eternity
I cannot fly away here

I am free only when my false body is creative

She reads; I circle overhead
She writes; I whisper in her ear
She dreams; I fly free for the night

The bars are high and rusty
The world the false me lives in is cold and gray
They are trying to make me the same
I laugh
I'm not going out without a fight

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Could
by: lucy

could u check out my poem called my special someone i think u might like it

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Lucy and Rachel
by: Caneel

Thank you for the feedback; you really made my day! I would really like to read your poems, do you think you could post a few of your titles as comments on this page? I'll check back when I can. Thanks again!

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by: lucy

I like this poem it sounds like lots of people's lives but the people don't think the way you do. I like the way you used your words they are amazing love to see more.

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Stunned
by: Rachel

Wow Caneel the poems you write the more I want to read. You are REALLY talented poet I think that your poems are better than mine. I can really relate to this poem.Keep up the fantastic work.

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Great Job Caneel!!
by: Anonymous

Wow Caneel, thats a great poem

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two thumbs up
by: McCollonough Ceili @Noriangirl

Well done!

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Gifted
by: Anonymous

Dear Caneel,

You are a very gifted young poet. We are enjoying your work immensely.

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