by Abbey (13 years old)
(Worthington, Ohio, USA)

Orange and red reflected in her eyes
A tear goes down her cheek
She takes her final breath
Then her final step
Into incinerating heat
One last cry
Slips her lips
But then silence falls
She rises out of the flames into the night
Her life taken too soon
All because of the flames,
She rises and cries
Out to the others
Not to listen
To the Nazis
That you were walking to your death
Inside the flames
You’ll never come out
To see the light again
But no one would listen
No matter how loud she cried
Then she left
To find her family,
Who also went into the flames
Who will be next

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Jun 18, 2012
thank you
by: Abbey (13 years old)

thanks....its my escape from bullying and home life.....i have like a writing journal that has all my feelings in poems! i don't know if i should publish them but i might....

Jun 01, 2012
by: sarah

well im a 8th grader going into nineth!lol.. you should try to be a poet! cause you just rock..:) if i had more thumbs they would all be up!

May 27, 2012
to shiz
by: Abbey (13 years old

thank you...again...ummm i love ur user name...lol

May 25, 2012
by: shiz

amazing poem ur xtremly talented ,dont ever stop writing! x

May 01, 2012
by: Abbey (13 years old)

sarah so does every one else in my family...lol i somethimes think its a bad thing because...well i dont really know y but i do... stupid right? im me... a 7th grader bout to b 8th...and according to my language arts teacher and "gifted"

Apr 30, 2012
thats a awesome poem
by: Sarah

that is such a amazing poem! cant believe your 13! im 14 and dang do i wish i could write something that good so easily! wow, wow, and triple wow.

Apr 24, 2012
that was inspiring
by: Anonymous

that was a really nice poem

Apr 21, 2012
thank you
by: abbey (13 years old)

thank you! My step dad thinks I'm nuts because i write poetry so easily and I don't even realize I just wrote something until its done. I go to an alternative middle school and we did a Holocaust remembrance day and I was supposed to be taking a literary terms test but finished early so I wrote this about the crematoriums that the death camps had.

Apr 21, 2012
by: lucy

you are so good, your talented!!!!!!!!!!!!

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