by JoyAnne

Beyond the shouts of time
my heart calls to rhyme
for all are one
with moon and sun.

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Mar 08, 2011
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by: Anonymous

I liked your rhymes and though, but I feel there is one line missing. I don't know if it is intentional or if your inspiration stopped there.
One more line like let's say
"over horizon's span"
would have concluded your poem beautifully.
Then again I could be wrong since I am thinking primarily in a different language

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