Holes

by Sasha
(North Somerset)

Can't no one see hurt through
my eyes
the same constant paleness of
my skin

Can't no one see I'm in pain
I feel like drowning in the rain
My spirit sings for glory
But my soul remains scared and bloody

I see pain throughout the world
But no one notices how I tread
Through the agony and cold
My heart is bold

Forever beating till I die

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May 22, 2012
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sasha
by: lucy

I'm glad someone likes my poems, I'm from too. what secondary school do you go to. and please write more poems they're great, and I'm sorry about the other comment I must have done something wrong !!!!!

May 21, 2012
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by: Anonymous

Hello Everybody,

First of all I would like to thank each of you for your contributions to My Word Wizard. I cannot emphasize enough how much we enjoy your work. We receive a fair number of submissions from young writers in your specific area and we are quite sure there is something unique in your drinking water. Your county is producing a number of outstanding young poets.

You are an amazingly talented group of writers and the depth of your work is extraordinary.

You should know that our editors read every selection that is submitted to us. Each piece must be approved by the editorial board before it is placed on the site. The editors only choose works they believe to have strong artistic merit. You have made us a better poetry forum.

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My Word Wizard is a wonderful community of writers and readers. We have never had any problems and our goal is to keep it that way. We are super protective of the young poets who contribute to our site. It is perfectly appropriate to leave your first name and the general location that you live in, and to discuss your thoughts and feelings, and even your ages with one another in the comments area. Just make sure you are not easily identifiable to anyone trolling the net with bad intentions.

You will notice that we shortened the initials to your town in the comments for this very reason.

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I hope I haven't scared you in any way. We are so pleased to provide a nurturing forum for our younger contributors to develop their craft, find their voice, and expose their poetry before the entire world. And I do mean the entire world. I readership is global.

Keep on writing and keep 'em coming!

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May 21, 2012
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lucy
by: sasha

I'm glad someone likes my poems, I'm from too. what secondary school do you go to. and please write more poems they're great!!!!!

May 20, 2012
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Lucy
by: Sasha

Hey Lucy sorry I haven't written back.I've been away that's sad that your mom doesn't like your poems because I love them.I relish and feel the emotion in every one.I'm also 13 and I live in. Keep writing more poems Lucy.

May 07, 2012
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amazing
by: kasey

i have to say this is one of the most amazing poems i have heard because its spoken from the heart and is truthful

May 02, 2012
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by: lucy

and I'm a girl from ...

May 02, 2012
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wow
by: lucy

wow you want to know about me. I'm 13teen and write poems and I'm kinda weird. tell me about you? and my mum hates most of my poems.

May 01, 2012
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Autors note
by: Sasha

Thank you Lucy for your comment my mum thinks they are not good but terrible.It's nice to have someone enjoy and understand my poems.I will write more but I would love to know more about you.

Apr 30, 2012
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hey:)
by: lucy

I would like to say thank you for my nice comments you seem like a amazing and talented person. I love your poem and would like to see some more poems from you!!!!:):):):):):):)

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