Hurt

by Pa Nou Vue
(Cairns, QLD, Australia)

Hate to say,
hard to breathe
under pressure always,
my eyes have thickened with tears
that cannot open to see
he dare not to care
and carried out a blare
right now there's nothing for me to hope for because my heart is hurt
with barely a beat
this feeling is just too hard to
endure for me to keep

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Jan 24, 2013
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Touching my heart
by: Jaejoonge (Hero)

I've hadn't much luck in love as well and after reading this poem i felt like it's telling me something important. you have talents Maiv. Please write more poems. Thankyou

Jan 24, 2013
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Amazing Poem!
by: Thao

every word written is touched by my heart. I know many people have talents at poems but none like you. Keep up the great work. please write more poems, I'd love to read them. thanks

Jan 19, 2013
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Wow!
by: Anonymous

I really like this poem as I find it very touching because it express a lot of pain. Lovely poem

Jun 03, 2012
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Dear Pa Nou
by: Anonymous

it's really good!!! i really liked you poem.

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