I Love You

by David McDonald
(Fife, Scotland)



Don’t you feel the sensation?
Does the ground not move under you?
Were not the angels singing,
I thought you would have heard them too

The kaleidoscope of colour above,
Has it not been seen by your eyes
All these wondrous experiences,
Do they not come as a surprise?

Can your ears not here the blood rushing,
Is your heart not loud in your head?
All your unruffled feathers you show,
Can they not be ruffled instead?

Perhaps I am thinking in error,
These things I experience are not true
You obviously do not love me dear,
Not the way that I love you


‘for each of us the sensation of falling in love is different’

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Apr 01, 2013
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excellent
by: MRINALINI

LIKED

Jan 04, 2013
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well done
by: Anonymous

I really liked this... the flow was lovely.

Nov 15, 2012
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love
by: jasmine

love is blind. Love is the best in the world ..... ? Either

Aug 12, 2012
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Bravo....
by: Wabil Janjua

sincere as such and still heart broken i know what it feels like .... amazing poem and best of luck with life...

Jun 19, 2012
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Tenderness still lives
by: Anonymous

Sincere and tender, lovely words

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