I Wonder Why

by Treya Mukherjee
(Noida, India)

I wonder why
I want to fly.

Up I will go
And see you so low.
Can you row?

Do you like to play?
Or watch T.V. all day?

I wonder why
We can't see God?
I wonder if
I can jump over the rod.

I wonder why
I say goodbye!

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Jun 17, 2012
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WORDS
by: Ritisha and Peu

Hey Treya, my word!!!... beyond words.... words fail us...

keep it up :)absolutely wonderful...

Jun 15, 2012
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wonder-ful!!
by: haripriya

hey love this...its sweet yet not silly! the ability to wonder is the most important and may you never lose your sense of wonder - for life and this world!!

Jun 13, 2012
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AB_ absolutely brilliant.!
by: Tapan

love the rythmic flow.. besides.. i only like rhymes.. :-)

Jun 13, 2012
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Chain of thoughts
by: Aradhana

Agree with Anisha... it's like a chain of thoughts... one provoking another... and mumbling from one onto another... wondering... like we all do... but never get around to saying them out loud... Well done Treya... for giving them a voice...

Jun 12, 2012
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well done
by: harish

Dear Treya,
Nice poem, well done. Keep writing. With best wishes,
Harish

Jun 12, 2012
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Nice :)
by: Lakshmi Prasanna

Quite thought provoking........ :)

keep it up Treya...well done !!

Jun 12, 2012
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Almost a Haiku
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Its a sort of poem that makes you think about several things in one! Good show keep it up.

Jun 12, 2012
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5 stars to the budding poetess!!!
by: Tanuja Dhuper

Loved the Poem and the thoughts expressed by Treya..and all while rhyming them perfectly,all "in-sync"...Way to go !!!

Jun 12, 2012
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Future Star
by: Ramanathan

My...My..... Someone is growing up real fast.... and the talent has potential for many awards and prizes in future....

All the Best Treya..... Keep it up.... Let me bring out the first book of your poems...

Jun 12, 2012
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Profoundly Pleasing!
by: Anisha

I loved the juxtapositioning of the profound and the everyday observations!

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