In The Rain

by Ray Martinez
(San Gabriel)

I stand in the rain by myself
waiting for her to turn back to me
when I see the light in her eyes
she turns to me and smiles upside-down
still thinking she's the one
I wonder why it's this way...
the only thing I can think of,
it's the way she is
I stand in the rain by myself

original date: 7-26-88

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the metaphor
by: william artigas

are you trying too say your stuck in the rain with a miserable person your trying too work something out is the rain a metaphor also?i enjoyed your poem i get it i think but i know their gotta be a hidden meaning too or am i wrong?

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RAIN RAIN GO AWAY
by: GEORGE C

Better get an umbrella....

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a bit confused
by: kjforce

I enjoyed your poem, however I'm sure there is a hidden meaning in there somewhere, just can't put my finger on it..perhaps I missed the point..
is she an old bat ? or is she not a happy person ?

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