Keep Walking

by LUCY
(Portishead, Somerset, England)

Keep walking,
because if you stop, you show you’re weak.
You can’t go back,
because it will only hurt more.
You start walking in the rain,
your friend comes running out saying,
you will come back cause you love me.
I stop and start to turn back,
then my mind says,
you’re doing it again, don’t go back ,
what's left for you.
So I put my hood up,
whilst biting my lip,
I turn the way I want to go,
I hold my head high,
and shout I’m sorry,
you suddenly realize what I mean.
And you start running to me saying don’t do it,
I give you a hug and say goodbye,
I start walking,
then I say quietly to myself 'keep walking...'

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May 24, 2012
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thanks
by: lucy

it's nice to know someone loves it

May 03, 2012
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nice one
by: lesego

thats wonderful i loved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mar 11, 2012
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Heart Strings
by: Brian

Lucy is such a wonderful writer. Her poems tug at the heart strings.

Mar 02, 2012
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Nanny says
by: Nanny Jan

A very deep and moving poem. Very emotive, I really liked it

Feb 20, 2012
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OMG!!
by: Rachel

Stunning poem lucy

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