Leaving

by Rachel
(North Somerset, England)

I lie down on the soft sand
Not afraid of whats coming
Almost straight away I felt ice
creep up my feet spreading like
a river across my body

I'm ready I thought, there's nothing
in this life to keep me going
No one to hold on to me
No one that cares about me

I suddenly feel as if I'm being
crushed
I can't breathe and all around me
is darkness

I try to think of happy times
but I feel that there are none
I close my eyes and I feel as
if someone is stabbing my heart

My heart stops beating
My life ended here

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Feb 12, 2012
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good job!
by: McCollonough

Wow! What a touching piece.

Feb 12, 2012
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nice
by: Anonymous

love this poem you should show this to your English teacher she would be impressed

Feb 12, 2012
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come back
by: Andrew

Don't go! I enjoyed reading the poem, it made me feel quite sad, and my immediate thought was I wanted to look after you. So there you go your poem "Leaving" made me care; produced an emotional effect:)

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