Liar

by Tristen
(Somewhere on Earth)

Crimson red making a stream
Flowing from my wrist you smile sadly at me
You say you love me, you say you care
but in the end you won't be there

Crimson red making a stream
You have left me to bleed
You said you loved me, you said you cared
But in the end you just weren't there

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Nov 08, 2012
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prefect crimson
by: Anonymous

well done. its prefect!

Jun 11, 2012
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by: Anonymous

very lovely..

Apr 30, 2012
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nice
by: I'm fine

Really good poem :) i felt exactly the same not so long ago ...

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