Like a Bird

by Roz
(Great Neck, NY)

Into the sky
My arms will fly
Like a bird that is proud and free
Away from my feelings
Far from my thoughts
Is the place I most want to be

It is only a week
Since last I felt
The warmth of your tender touch

Perhaps if my heart were to follow the birds
I'd forget that I miss you so much

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I agree with Ron
by: Anonymous

Sweet and light but powerful and deep. Bravo Roz!

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So Sweet/Yet Powerful
by: Ron/Phoenix, Az

There was something really sweet about that poem. The simplicity underscoring the power of the emotions which propel it.

We look forward to more.

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Thank You So Much
by: Anonymous

Wonderful Poem Roz. I really identified with it. Really lovely.

Jane
Bristol, UK

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