Loneliness

by EM DEE
(Karachi, Pakistan)

When the sun goes down upon you
And when all things turn grey that were first yellow and blue,
You feel like going and hiding in a hole
There’s no one there to bring you back to your soul.
You just don’t know who to trust
You feel like a stranger on the Earth’s crust.
You feel that you’re just not a part of this world anymore
You start getting cranky evermore.
No one knows what you’re going through
You feel like no one understands you.
You just want to stay alone and cry
To stop, you just wouldn’t try,
When the sun goes down upon you
And when all things turn grey that were first yellow and blue.

Maryam D.
14 yrs

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Jun 16, 2012
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