lonely children are like threads

by M.K Luton
(England)

My shoes hug my feet
My feet step on my shoes
My gloves keep my hand warm
My hands leave my gloves exposed to the cold
My hat whispers sweet things into my ears
My ears ignore my hat
My scarf cuddles my neck
My neck doesn't accept
So the threads are abandoned
And are donated to others.

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lonely children are like threads

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Jun 10, 2011
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lOnley children are like threads
by: ;)

A bit confused......
need explanation

Jun 10, 2011
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Jun 10, 2011
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by: SusyPichon

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Jun 10, 2011
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good poem
by: mELoVePoEMs

I like your poem its nice

Jun 10, 2011
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what does the poem sifnify
by: Anonymous

Dear poet,
your poem is deep and very inspirational. It has countless and continual meaning. The meaning is a perfect example of enjambment. Its interesting and puzzling to the mind. however all poems are a balance of simplicity derived from an experience event or an aspiration.I would like to find out your point of view as the writer of the poem in great detail. An analysis of what caused you to write a poem as such.
Yours faithfully
curious Reader ??

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