My Dog

by Stella
(United Kingdom)

THIS IS MY DOG WITH IT'S FRIEND

THIS IS MY DOG WITH IT'S FRIEND

THIS IS MY DOG WITH IT'S FRIEND




I have a dog but it's name is Hedgehog.
Its color is black and it likes to play with my railway track.

It loves to eat bones and for dessert eats ice-cream cones.
Its furry fur and sparkling eyes.

Its barking sound and its little nose round.
Its friendly attitude and lovely gratitude.

Its long fluffy tail and its sharp little nails.
It may be a dog but for me its my best friend.


I LOVE YOU HEDGEHOG!!!!!!!!!!!


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paws
by: Anonymous

i love animals i really like this poem cats and dogs are my fav

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Good Job :)
by: Brianna

Your poem is really good and made me think about the puppy that i used to have before he was hit by a car. Their isn't much you need to work on just try to change that it so it's like the other person suggested.

Great job!!!

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Love it!
by: Lily, Chicago, Illinois

Hi, I love this poem! It is very sweet and funny.

The only thing I would suggest is that you change all the "its" to "it has". I think it would work better. I hope that suggestion is OK with you.

But otherwise, I wouldn't change a thing. It really made me appreciate my dog much more. It sounds like you were writing about him! I can't thank you enough for writing this poem. It is one of the best animal poems out there.

P.s. I love England!

Lily
Age 12
Chicago, Illinois, USA

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plzz viewers
by: Stella

plzz people i want u comment and rate my poem so i get to know how was the poem i wrote.
Thank You :)

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