My Escape

by Aleta Gantt
(Yakima, WA - USA)

Sharing daydreams so vivid
With texture and taste
Sweet on my tongue
Skin draped in lace

They are colored romantic
Bright pallet to the eye
Purples and Yellows
In a smoldering sky

We visit this wonderland
Again and again
A tangle of fire
Wrapped in bare skin

Together we're drifting
On clouds of escape
Bodies entwined
In this world that we make

These daydreams so vivid
With reality blend
Until one is the other
Beginning and end

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by: 206

its deep,it tremendous,it has feeling.finding each ave to guide you in your journey will bring you to realize so much,of your self of your inner being,of G-d's will for you

by: Andrew Grant

This is a beautifully written poem, worthy of publication for the world. More people need to be exposed to writing like this. Including my own lol.

I Felt It!
by: Joyce Fields

I liked "My Escape." Very nice!! I could "feel" it!!

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