My Love, My Love

by Kayla Pavlick
(New Albany, Mississippi)

My love, my love
For him, flies like a dove.
A dove upon its wings,
And about my love for him it sings.
But then it's wings break,
And Oh! How my heart ached,
The day he walked away from
My love, my love.

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Jun 13, 2012
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short
by: sarah

its very short, but writen well.. you should have tryed to stretch it alittle moore but besides that both thumbs are up:)

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