My Valentine (A Shakespearean Sonnet)

by Patrick Villaroya
(Lodi, California, United States)

This is the day that I want to tell you,
A lot of things that i wanted to say.
Spending the time it took to pursue you,
Since I spotted you on that first school day.
I never tried to approach you because,
I thought that you were just out of league.
I want to tell you, you're someone I love,
I've held this so long, will we ever be?

I love your smile, your eyes, you're beautiful,
When I talk to you I get so clammy.
I think you are cute and so squeezable,
I hope that you won't come and deny me.
You are an angel, you're sent from above,
You are my only, my one and true love.

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Feb 07, 2014
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Watch the beat
by: Thpmas Vaughan Jones

You need to pay a little more attention to your rhyme scheme and iambic metre.

May 12, 2012
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amazing
by: Allie ;)

Amazing best poem ever! You are a really awesome poet! That poem was very thoughtful i wish all guys were like that.

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