by Subashen Naidoo
(Durban, South africa)

Crossroads that mark destiny
The crumble of great years
Shattered in a while
Leaving behind memories to most

Times of weeping lay ahead
A mysterious journey awaits
To defy the concept that has left scientists in deep thought.

A coward you may say, but a hero in his own way
As one proceeds to a lifetime of conspiracy.
Almost entering the Next Plane

The next seed fulfills the dream.
But who knows the possibility of lifebuoy may transition the opposite.
Who knows... You would never know.....

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May 02, 2012
Response to Phelicia
by: Subashen Naidoo

I really appreciate those encouraging words. Thank you for reading and expressing your thoughts and opinions :)

Apr 30, 2012
brilliant poet
by: Phelicia

Wow! It's really great! I love your vocabulary and expression. i think its excellent considering its modern view of how the world is. if this is just your beginning of writing poetry, you are a natural! This poem is Magnificent! :)

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