Night Flier

by Caneel
(Maine, USA)

I fly by night
Quietly, so quietly
Nobody sees me
Even I am not sure I am here

It feels so real
The night air, the clouds with my mother's gentle, caressing hands
I am flying, believe me, I am

I shield my eyes to watch the sun rise
So pretty, so pretty
So-BRIGHT!

I am visible, for a single moment
Nobody sees

I open my eyes
I cannot fly in this form
Here, now, I am just a regular girl
By night, I am so much more

I fly by night
I am a Night Flier

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by: lucy

you are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by: Rachel

Wow Caneel your poems get better and better. I really got an image in my head as I was reading this poem.Keep writing the brilliant poems Caneel.

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My poems are from school
by: Anonymous

Hi Caneel,

I haven't written any poems on here yet. I need to find the one's I wrote from school.

If I put some up, I'll tell you.

Tracy

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Hey, Tracy!
by: Caneel

Tracy, thank you for your feedback! I'm totally a sucker for comments.
I'd like to read some of your poems. Can you give me some titles of yours?

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PLEASE WRITE MORE <3
by: Tracy

Hi Caneel,

I've seen so many of your poems. You are definitely one of my favorite poets on Wizard.

I'm sorry about your dog. I read that poem too.

You have a good way with words. Please don't stop writing your awesome poems.

I will try to write like this. My teacher says I have some talent.


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