RACHEL

by Lucy
(Portishead, Somerset, England)

I see you every day,
in every single play.
you're always in pain,
and I guess I'm partly to blame.
I should not leave you on your own,
it is very unknown.
I guess you have always been there,
to play a game of truth or dare.
if I left, moved away,
I swear I would come back another day.
my friends needs me,
so I guess it's meant to be.
I may not be with you in the future,
but hold on...
because I promised I would be there,
and I really do care.
I see you every day,
and that's all I've got to say...


(for Rachel,love you lots!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

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Aug 07, 2012
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thanks
by: lucy

thanks Andrew for ur lovely comment i really appreciate it.

Aug 06, 2012
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nice piece
by: andrew

i guess ur right our poems do sound alike(change and time). anyway am glad I stopped by to read such a lovely poem.

Jul 10, 2012
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oh sorry put wrong name
by: lucy

thanks... but u know for a fact i will find no one special the only person who is special to me is my best-friend Josh W., but who would want someone like me i get made fun of, so... but nice comment.

Jul 05, 2012
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i,,,,,
by: rachel

thanks... but u know for a fact i will find no one special the only person who is special to me is my best-friend Josh W., but who would want someone like me i get made fun of, so... but nice comment.

Jun 23, 2012
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To Lucy
by: Rachel

Lucy I cannot put into words what this poem means to me. This poem is so special, you know why because I know this is what I mean to you. And this is what I'll always mean to you. Forever. I hope you find someone really special to share your life with.

From your best friend

Rachel

Apr 26, 2012
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Amazing
by: Jake

You're an amazing poet, and your friendship with Rachel is great. I wish you much luck in your future. Your poems have inspired me.

Feb 21, 2012
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nice
by: Anonymous

good

Feb 21, 2012
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Thanks for the dedication (to me)
by: Rachel

Thanks lucy for writing a poem about me its really sweet i found it very interesting and i enjoyed reading it.Keep up the good work.

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