Rain

by Aimen And Habiba
(Pakistan,Karachi)

The rain shatters down to the ground
We all go merrily around,

It comes down and whispers in my ear,
That a wonderful spring is here.

It gives me a pleasant smile
So I walk with it a mile

The drops of it shine,
I think this beautiful thing is all mine!

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Jul 12, 2012
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Rain
by: M. Nasir Ayubi

It's so real

Mar 23, 2012
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lovely poem
by: tejas

awesome poem on rain

Mar 23, 2012
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gr8 poem
by: tejas

awesome poem on rain

Mar 22, 2012
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nice job111
by: Anonymous

this is the best poem so far
KEEP IT UP!!!

Feb 07, 2012
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Lovely piece
by: McCollonough Ceili

It is so great to read a postive poem about rain.

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