Red Love White Love

by Lesheny
(Namibia)

If colours were to be given away forever
I could give you red and white
the colours that will make your day forever
the colours that remind you of the love I feel for you
the colours that light your life
the colours that will feed your love
the colours that will make you blush when you see me
the colours that keep you next to me forever
I love you

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Aug 19, 2012
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by: Anonymous

My constructive criticism:
"If colours where to be given away forever" -- Change 'where' to 'were'.

Keep writing nice poems.

Feb 08, 2012
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lesheni
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i love your my child good work

Feb 07, 2012
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write more please
by: Anonymous

lesheny ur peom means alot us girl keep it up why dnt u become an auther

Feb 07, 2012
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you touched my heart
by: Anonymous

dear lesheny your poem is all i needed to make my husband understand how much he means to me thank you my child

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