Spiritus Divine

by D.J Kaidan (Kwazinative)
(UK)

Inspiration. The muse that spurs us on towards reaching the sky.
Ah, Spiritus. The Divine Breath. gleaning in the distant mind's eye

Sparking an awakening of senses through seeking those legends of
old
Hidden treasure more precious than sapphire, ruby diamonds or
gold.

Shimmering inner portals deep yonder unto the worlds unseen
Embarking upon perilous journey, becoming spiritually clean

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Spiritus Divine

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Nov 21, 2010
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Feedback greatly Appreciated
by: Kaidan.J (Kwazinative)

Thanks! ^__^
I appreciate your feedback and kind words of sincerity!. likewise. I am always on the lookout for Inspirators. and you are such one.
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Nov 18, 2010
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by: dreamersteve_99

your use of The Divine Breath. gleaning in the distant mind's eye, is rather unique here I can see what you are describing. I will keep an eye of my own on your future poetry tweets and this site..very good work you don't need a critic just an audience ..have a good one

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