Star-Crossed Valentines

by Maria Panlilio
(San Diego, CA)

Star-Crossed Valentines

Thine eyes are
the song of my nightly dreams
Thy kiss is the
gentle whisper carried like a zephyr
Over the lonely dunes
where my soul wanders
Thine embrace is the ambrosia
of an Eden abode yet come
To our fantasy shared
a fleeting sigh held
Still awaiting that promised nectar
of a tender dawn with you

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Aug 19, 2012
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Thanks for the comments
by: Anonymous

Wow. Thank you, gentlemen, for the wonderful comments. I love it/them. :-)
Sorry for the slow reply.
Maria

Feb 20, 2011
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Enchanting
by: Mike

In the evergreen of midnight
You wait.
A rhapsody lying
in the low grass;
Your smile beckons like opium
to a lover?s addiction.

Feb 19, 2011
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Magical
by: Angelo

I would have given you a 5-star rating if this were a little longer. Beautiful lines. I was longing for more. Loved it.

Feb 09, 2011
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Wow
by: McCollonough Ceili

This poem really speaks to me of your longing for your dream love to come into your waking world.
good job.

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