Sweetie

by Allan Mc Kay
(France, Var)

I had the world's most beautiful sister
She was calm, peaceful and tender
Like a ray of light in the deepest darkness
With my sweetie no sadness, just happiness
One day, hand in hand we told each other
Promised It’s for the whole life, forever

But on a cold, and awful Monday
You’ve left me and gone away
Now you’re gone I do know why
But until this day I always cry
I can’t stop thinking and wondering
Why it’s so hard, painful and aching

No matter the biggest golden lucky penny
Nothing compares to your beauty
Just for me, the biggest gold mine on earth?
Your love is worth all the gold on earth !

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Oct 09, 2013
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by: Allan Mc Kay

@kjforce:

Target !

You're right. She has just moved. About 700 miles away from me. Thanks for your comment. I did the best I can with my little english.

Have a nice day

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by: kjforce

very well written, truly a deep devotion/connection to your Sister...nice job..
I assume she just moved/relocated to another area ?

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