Tears of Regret

by Jade
(America...)



Everyone became silent,
The world stopped turning,
So many lonely souls yearning.
Hearts that used to love became violent,
Kisses that were passion turned to poison.
When everything used to matter,
But now the pure feelings are scattered.
Tears of regret filling my eyes,
I should have seen through your charming disguise.
Never more is love the same,
The game you played left scars and pain.

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Dec 01, 2014
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Excellent contrast of vocabulary and feelings!
by: Mr Nobody

I was drawn in when I first read that poem and could not stop myself from reading... I do not know what it feels like to be heartbroken, but this poem would add it up for me.

Oct 27, 2012
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Wow
by: Definity

That's a beautiful poem, and I know what it's like to be hurt. Anyway, great poem <3

Aug 28, 2012
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great
by: kk

great poem this is exactly how i felt

Aug 19, 2012
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Lucky Duck
by: Caneel

I really like your poem; I can do all other kinds of poems really well exept for Goth. They just sound lame. If you could help me I'd really appreciate it.

Aug 19, 2012
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//.v
by: Nobody

Amazing...

Jul 31, 2012
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Nice
by: I'm Fine

Really good poem, I love it ! I know your pain and I can imagine what you re going through ...

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