The Cage

by Lauren
(Somerset, England)

I'm right here,
Can't you see me?
I'm in here,
In this cage.


At least,
I think it's a cage,
It's so cold,
I can hear you,
Stop acting like you can't see me,


I thought you were my friend,
how could you put me in here?
I'm so alone...
Please, get me out!
Stop lying right to my face!


Help me.
You think it's cool,
Doing this to me?
It gets smaller and smaller every day...


Help me,
Don't let me fade away....

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Woah
by: Anonymous

I didn't think I would ever get this many comments, thanks!

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nice
by: lucy

i like ur poem totally speechless and emo fairies are amazing

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Thanks,
by: Lauren

Hey C, sorry, I can't remeber how to spell your name, and thank you, it really means a lot.

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I Can Relate...
by: Caneel

Wow, Lauren, I love this poem. It really captures how I feel sometimes in life. Keep up the great work!

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Thanks
by: Lauren

Thanks Rachel, I'll write when I find some more inspiration. e.g. "my friend is obsessed with sparkly emo fairies" lol

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Wow
by: Rachel

Wow Lauren I never knew you wrote poems. This is such a great poem. Please write more.

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