The old couple!

by sana
(Budgam,j&k,India)


when the school bus i was to board
i saw an old couple on the road
carrying two or three suitcases
with sad and depressed faces
trying to cross the road
they had a dirty and untidy dress code
i went there and talked to them
it felt as though their heart carried a cactus stem
they were thrown out of their house
like it is done to a dirty mouse
this was all done by their gem
to my parents what i am
yes, by the ones for whom they could die
seeing all this i wanted to cry
i made them sit for a while
i wanted them to smile
i wished that their happiness i could buy
but to them i couldn't lie
they got up and started walking
to each other they started talking
they went on and on and disappeared
from that day i feared
why people's hearts are blocking
isn't sympathy on their door knocking
from that day i came to know
before our parents we should bow
never let them down
let them be your crown
with their good wishes try to grow
be a soft soul like snow

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Apr 21, 2013
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xlent
by: Anonymous

i liked the poem very much......

Jan 13, 2013
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INCREDIBLY AWESOME
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So emotional that my sister had a breakdown and tickled herself to death

Nov 08, 2012
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simply ossum the best poem ever read by a common person
FOCUS ON THIS AND U WILL BE THE BEST WRITER IN FUTURE

Oct 28, 2012
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Heart touching
by: Mr. Unknown

It was really heart touching I loved ur poem
BEST OF LUCK SANA
u are a wonderful talent from j&k
MR.unkown

Oct 27, 2012
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VERY TOUCHING...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ROCKSTAR :) N I HOPE ONE DAY U'LL BECOME THE BEST POETS THE WRLD HAS EVER HAD :) GOOOD LUCK ...N KEEP WRITING
REGARDS,
BUSH..

Oct 26, 2012
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Xlnt poem. Simply ossem.

Oct 26, 2012
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Mind blowing
by: Sachin

This poem is truly a piece of one of the fine collections I have ever seen thankx for such a wonderfull piece of poetry keep on writing such poems

BEST OF LUCK
SACHIN

Oct 26, 2012
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Fantastic
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Please keep writing this is the best poem I have read

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Wonderful
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It is a wonder poem just no words to say it is just fabulous

Oct 26, 2012
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Xlent
by: Dr Gulzar

Very nice. Emotional poem.good luck to the writer

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