The Rabbit

by Italy Arteaga
(Paragould, Arkansas)

A rabbit goes go go
And stops before me
Looking eyes see me
Hunter!!!
Running goes the rabbit
Sun turns to night
Looking glowing eyes see me
I see rabbit...
Hunter shoot paw!
Dead rabbit
Crying crying I am crying
Rabbit gone
This is the end...

Italy age 9

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Jan 09, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Just love it
by: Grammy

I just loved her choice of words. She was able to convey with just a few words her feeling for the rabbit and made us put ourself in the rabbits position of being hunted.
Jan 08, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		great work
by: Anonymous

This is a awesome poem! Lots of depth I love it!
Jan 08, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		great
by: grammy

What a great use of words. Told an interesting story with emotion for her rabbit. LOVED IT<3

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