by Ceci
(lllionis, United States)

This thing always has a smile,
This thing you can chase for a mile
If you try to flee
Thing will get you, just wait and see,

Thing lives in the shadow,
So if I were you
I would stay in the meadows
If you try to fight,
Thing will light you up with all his might.

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Dec 02, 2012
by: Allyssa

What was the THING? Thanks
By the way I really liked your poem but I think you could improve it by personifying that object you were talking about if it was a non living thing thanks!
Read MY poem its called The Pencil

Sep 04, 2012
not bad
by: Anonymous

the first paragraph was good but the second wasn't nearly as interesting.

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