This is Me

by Ravyn

Deep down inside me
Where no one can see
I'm blue, blue as the deep ocean sea
There's a girl deep inside that feels all alone
And she's trying to fix a heart that's becoming unsewn
Wondering what I could have done to deserve
All of the things in my life that have occurred
But I put on a smile so no one will know
The real girl deep inside that I will never let show

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Apr 08, 2015
can I use part of poem in a book?
by: paul

We are writing a book on childhood pain,. Your poetry crystallizes those somatic feelings. Can we get permission to use part of This is me?

Mar 18, 2015
by: Anonymous

I love your poem. It is sad, unique, and is really easy to understand. I love the wording, and you really put a lot of feeling in it. I usually leave a suggestion, but yours was amazing.

May 08, 2014
Read My Mind
by: Dragon

This is amazing. describes me perfectly.

Apr 27, 2014
the words left me quiet and speechless cause the touched me heart
by: innocent shamboko

The words had me quiet for a minute and had me speechless without a word to say, because they went straight through my heart and touched my soul..very deep words.

Apr 05, 2014
Amazing how u read my mind
by: Anonymous

This was an amzing poem and it really explains who i am so... 'this is me' thnks alot 4 doing this poem and yh thnks again 4 really readin my mind. ur probally da only person whos accidently understood me. thnks alot thks so much.

Apr 19, 2013
sad but sweet
by: McCollonough Ceili

I was saddened by your words, but loved the way you wrote them.

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