Time...

by Anabela Loureiro
(Toronto, Canada)



Time does not stop...
There are moments I wish it would.
The ones when all the beauty
of everyone and everything
leaves me breathless.
The moments when I feel
so much peace and joy
resting on my shoulders.
When I feel as powerful as dynamite;
when the song in my heart sounds like an
orchestra for my soul.
Those are the precious and priceless
moments that capture my essence
and my true, inner beauty.

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Good poem--comment from B.C.
by: Eve

Liked your poem very much--nice images created by your words. The only thing that didn't seem to fit was the word "dynomite". For me it took away from the softness and serenity of the poem: perhaps "greek godess" (or name one)?? Lovely work--enjoyed it!

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