Truth

by Abbey (12 years old)
(Worthington, Ohio)

Truth is the hardest thing to find. It is hidden beneath the ice
of a never ending river. The truth sinks deeper with every lie.
When the ice is broken only one chip comes off that skitters across the river. It is running away before the ice cracks. Once one lie is told it takes 100 truths be told to trust yourself again.

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Truth

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Jan 12, 2012
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Love it!
by: CathieT

Great thoughts, well written, perceptive and thought provoking.
(Don't pay any attention to negativity, sometimes people just don't get it!) Keep writing :-)

Jan 03, 2012
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sorry
by: southpawokpoet

I'm sorry I meant no disrespect to you. You are wise beyond your years. I am proud to read what you write and am much touched by it. Please rest gently. Dusty

Jan 01, 2012
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ok
by: abbey

i don't really know what you mean...i ask god,my self,and others for forgiveness...can you please clarify what you mean...i am 12 years old and don't dig very deep the poems just flow out

Dec 27, 2011
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Poignant
by: southpawokpoet

I don't know what is hurting you, what you wrote is very poignant. but please cut yourself some slack.Otherwise you will burn your self to slag in no time. Try to understand your motive before you get onto your self., and know you deserve forgiveness even from yourself. Rest gently please. Dusty

Dec 17, 2011
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Go for it
by: Anonymoussouthpawokpoet

Bless you for standing up for your work, and for yourself. Also realizing for where the problem lies. Please keep your mind and heart and soul on your gifts and your work. Rest Gently please.

Dec 17, 2011
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kayla
by: abbey [12 years old]

kayla t. i think... if you don't like it just because it doesn't rhyme then i get it but try to find the meaning too it and you may like it better. poems don't have to rhyme and quite frankly they mean more and tell more of a story when they don't... and I've read your poems and they don't rhyme so stop telling me to make a rhyming poem... o.k i can take criticism but only to an extent and i want you to stop telling me what i already know... what's done is done and I'm proud of this poem that is the one thing you can and will never take away from me!!!!!

Dec 16, 2011
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its not very good
by: kayla

the truth is that this poem isn't very good. it doesn't rhyme. i only like rhyming poems. write a better RHYMING poem....k? so maybe it will be a good poem. this one sucks.

Dec 03, 2011
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Cool
by: Abbey( 12 years old)

Me here again and thank you yet again. I just found out that one of my other poems is n here! If you want to see it go to love poems and the first one called love is mine also so cheak me out. Luv you guies thanks for ALWAYS being there for me and my choises

Dec 03, 2011
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Naty's Poem
by: Anonymous

Naty's lovely poem called "Silence" may be found at:

http://www.mywordwizard.com/silence1.html

Editor

Dec 03, 2011
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AWESOME POEM!
by: Katherine M.

This poem is awesome Abbey! I really like it! U did a great job and congrats on winning! See u on Monday! :)

Dec 01, 2011
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WOW!
by: Emily S

Wow, Abbey! I couldn't write a poem like that! You did a REALLY, REALLY, REALLY great job. You should read this poem at forum! That's honestly, the best poem I have ever seen in my whole life. You have a real talent. Good job!

Dec 01, 2011
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thank you again
by: abbey [12 years old]

thank you i luv u guies too!!!!! and naty ur poem isnt on here i looked they might not have accepted it. :[ cheak your email...

Dec 01, 2011
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ABBEYGATOR!
by: Marissie rissie roo

Abbey,
I love you like a sister! You might get a little screwy sometimes(lol but i still love ya!)but you really do have a true talent! I don't want you to ever stop!I believe in you Abbey, you can be a famous poet someday!
*~Marisa~*

Nov 30, 2011
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Nice!(:
by: Kayla

I think iv actually heard this poem before... (: try doing rhyming poems

Nov 30, 2011
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Good Job(:
by: Kayla

i liked it ...

Nov 30, 2011
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naty rocks
by: naty naty naty aty naty naty

hey abbey tomarrow comeover cuz im bored maybe we can right other poems again oh and readers please chck out my poem SILENCE

Nov 30, 2011
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Phoenix Friends
by: Kira

Abbey i absolutley love you! you are one of my best friends and you are an amazing writer! love you abbey!! <3

Nov 24, 2011
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thank you
by: abbey [ 12 years old]

thank you!!!!! I will keep up with my writing as best I can. I have a 10 houre day at school, so writing often is hard. I also just started secondary school so homework is harder too. i really enjoy writing and will try to write at night if not too cayotiouk [ or however you spell that].:] btw I'm not the best speller lol

Nov 22, 2011
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You Go Girl!!!
by: Southpawokpoet

You have a tremendous gift, please just keep unwrapping it page by page. I will be waiting with bated breathe to read more. Please.Rest gently please.

Nov 22, 2011
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Well Done
by: Anonymous

Hello Abbey,

By all means you should keep up with your writing. And write often.

We very much enjoyed the idea behind "Truth" as well as the way you presented the idea in poetic form.

The more you write and the more you open yourself up to constructive criticism (as you ask for in your comment), the better you will become at your craft.

Very few writers are actually willing to place their egos on the line and ask people for an honest opinion of their output. We are extremely impressed with the maturity you demonstrate as a writer, and at such a tender age.

We very much look forward to more of your work.

Warmest regards.

Alan
Chief Editor
My Word Wizard

Nov 22, 2011
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let me know
by: abbey

Ok, I'm the writer of this poem and want to let you know that this was the first poem I've ever written. I want to know what you think, and if I should keep writing.

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