by Shaun

Morning rise is here again
My hand it hurt damn the pain
We slept on the corner again
But soon it will be just a memory full of pain

She struggles to open her eyes
From all the tears her face has added on some years
She seems worn out lying their in the fetal position
She's scared to go through the awful transformation

I put the magic pills on the table
And i moved back i don't think I'll be able
She was a part of me together we were or are one
What will i do when we become apart simply just one

"please don't" she begs of me
She knows her disappearance will come to be
"why don't you love me" she asks of me
And she starts to cry and falls from her self being

The second day a test for we
Should we believe or should we we continue to be
A life for her and me
Tomorrow will see the trueness of it

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by: Haley Riordan

The storyline was great! You just needed to go back over the execution and reword some things, also please use spell check!
Happy Days and good job.

by: Anonymous

just ok

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