Untamed

by Nells Wasilewski
(Tullahoma, TN. USA)

wind rushes past as
I shiver in my jacket
motorcycle ride

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Dec 03, 2016
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Bravo
by: Nizar Sartawi

I've enjoyed reading it. You're following the original Japanese haiku in at least three aspects:
5-7-5, season, and deviation from the premise in the conclusion. Inspiring!

Nov 03, 2012
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Untamed
by: DeeKee

This was an awesome haiku. I really felt the poem. Keep them coming

Nov 03, 2012
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Untamed
by: DeeKee

Thsi is very cool. Good mental picture of what you were feeling. Enjoyed the Haiku read. Keep them coming!

Nov 03, 2012
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Opened Eyes
by: Anonymous

Thank you for re-introducing me to poetry.
Love your style.

Nov 03, 2012
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Untamed
by: Anonymous

Very nice!

Nov 02, 2012
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Untamed
by: It's

Love it!

Nov 01, 2012
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Untamed
by: Anonymous

Very good mental picture. I could feel the chill of winter.

Nov 01, 2012
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Untamed
by: Anonymous

This was a good haiku. I get chills thinking of bike riding on a cold day

Nov 01, 2012
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Untamed
by: Hazel

Great Haiku!

Nov 01, 2012
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Untamed
by: Nick

very cool hard to find true Haiku

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