When I See You

by Abbey (13 years old)
(columbus ohio)

When you pass me in the hall,
The butterflies burst out of me,
Every time,
My breath is taken away,
I never knew what true love was like,
Until I met you,
You showed me the light,
At the end of the tunnel,
The feeling,
Of being swept off my feet,
Being blown away,
Every time I see you,

I am lost in love,

When I see you smile,
You are my dream,
Come true,
I'm becoming scared,
Of how much I love you,

My heart has waited,

For true love,
Now it's filled,
Up to the brim,
With your love,
Every time I see you,
it becomes hard to breath,

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Jan 25, 2013
by: Anonymous

amazing !!!!!!!!!!

Jul 09, 2012
thank you
by: Abbey (13 years old)

i believe it is! i met a boy at the beginning of the year and we have been dating for 10 months on the 12!so ya! and thank you! i dont even remember writing this! but i did so thank you!

Jul 09, 2012
by: Shaista Khadim

I don't know what you are experiencing is love or not,but dear Abby,its unbelievable to say that you are only 13 and yet you create such masterpieces...Keep up the good work and continue writing such amazing poems:)

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