Whirlpool

by SuriShiva Kumar
(Australia)

Conflicting currents
sunken feeling deep in chest
spring in the desert!

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Apr 17, 2013
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Awesome poem!
by: Anonymous

Really good... I used it as an example for my class!

Mar 30, 2013
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Help me
by: surishiva Kumar

Your encouraging comments are helpful to improvise further.

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