who you are ?

by katie

everything is going wrong,
and its not taking long,
it's like in in the wrong place,
and everything is happening in some kind of race.
i don't belong here,
but i must belong somewhere.
i need to show who i am,
i need to show who i really am but damn.
no one will understand,
defiantly not on this land.

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Feb 01, 2018
I understand
by: Robert Seminara

This place, where things grow, and everywhere is something old pretending to be something new; the point of it all is lost on the listener. This IS a race. And the winners lose first, then the losers win in second place. I want to scream and bite and fight the shiniest of them all! I don’t care who cares or stares or dares to dare me to. I understand you. Can I have some more please? Because now we’re alone together. I mean together we’re alone among this crowd. Thank the heavens.

Apr 05, 2017
who you are?
by: Anonymous

I understand fully how you feel. Just keep going my friend.
DON'T QUIT! That is want they want. Don't give these poor souls the satisfaction. I will pray for their wretched souls.

Jul 23, 2013
by: Anonymous


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