Withdrawl From Love

by Jasmine Comer
(New Port Richey, Florida)

I sit alone in my room
I promised myself I wouldn't cry
This is far too soon to say good-bye
Here I am and tears aren't running dry

I feel like I'm dying inside, my light going out
The tears trickling down like rain I can feel
This cruel reality I can't grasp, what did I do?
He has torn a hole in me and this is the beginning for my soul to heal

Whatever I did crossed the line,something went wrong
It feels like being torn apart and I crack
My pain is consuming what he has left me with
He ripped up my heart and threw it back

Nothing I do can fix what he did
He left scars across my soul that can never be mended
His love is so close to hate I couldn't distinguish
even after what he did my love for him could never be bended

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May 07, 2012
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by: I'm fine

Well i'd like to tell you that everything's gonna be alright for you and I hope it will but there are cases where the pain just never leaves completely... So sometimes everything end up just the way you wanted it to be but sometimes you just have to move on even though the scars will be still there inside your heart. Though, just remember that in the end you end up being stronger than you were before and that's worth it. So don't give up ;)

May 07, 2012
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by: jasmine comer

it is. it's more confusing with it now and i can't tell all the things that are happening now. i just hope it turns out ok in the end.

Apr 19, 2012
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by: I'm fine

Just pure beautiful poetry... Excellent poem, and if it is inspired by your own feelings then I know how you feel...

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