You Have Done All You Can Do, Now Go...

by LUCY
(Portishead)

There once a girl,
and she had such a good friend.
But the girl wanted to die,
and that made her friend cry...

Her friend used to stop her,
but in the end the girl killed herself.
And her friend was so annoyed about it,
but she would never quit...

She helped that girl's mum,
with the funeral and putting the girls stuff away.
The friend felt so bad,
and it made that girl watching over her sad...

The friend visited the grave every day,
because she did not want to be anywhere else.
One day that girl’s mother said to the friend,
you have done all you can do, now go...

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May 24, 2012
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by: lucy

yeah it did except it was my friends mum so and that for the nice comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!

May 24, 2012
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Really?
by: Caneel

Did that really happen to you? if it did, I'm sorry. I am not really accustomed to death. The closest thing to me was when my Black Lab, Nemo, got hit by a car and died last November. And I cried about that for weeks afterwards, so it must be worse if it was a friend (I wrote a poem or two about Nemo on this site...).
You have a gift with words, Lucy. I love your poem!


Apr 12, 2012
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by: Rachel

This poem to me is very emotional and has touched my heart.I almost cried,You do need a friend to help you when times are rough. Take every stride carefully in life and live life to the full. And as best you can.I know that you need friends in life especially ones that you can trust and have a laugh with. Lucy, you have a wonderful gift. DON'T ever lose it.

Apr 11, 2012
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by: lucy

this poem for me is kinda special and it just for me feels like you need a really good friend to help you through the rough times but you sometimes may not make it through the rough times... I hope you feel the same when you read it if you felt something else please say...

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