Your last memories of a ganster

by Yessenia Gomez
(Avondale Arizona)

I'm sitting at the edge of my bed looking at your photograph and recalling the memories, why couldn't it be me why you, why did you had to go into find detail in your gang work,I remember this memory wished never happened, I remember myself walking down an ally soon I stopped, I saw you there and you mouthed me the words "stop don't move," and I didn't knew what I was doing, or thinking but I disobeyed you, so you gave me this look I never thought you had, the look made me shiver and nerves about what you gonna do next. Before me or you were to move our lips, your rivals slowly came out they pointed at me and laughed, I didn't knew why but they laughed, their next move they pulled out a gun and pointed it towards me, I couldn't scream so I raced my arms to my face and as I did that I saw my life's events, I soon heard the trigger so I fell to the ground but I didn't get shot you did!, how could you take the bullet for me it was mine I caused all this, I wish you heard, but no instead I cried, and I lifted your once coffee carmel hand that was soon losing it's color, and I lifted your delicate hand and pressed it against my cheek, I felt myself cry, but I didn't knew what to feel, angry because you took the bullet for me and I didn't listen to you, or sad cuz you died,that felt like it was yesterday, but no it was few years ago but my wound still seems so fresh, and I hope you're looking down at me instead of up, and letting you know that I love you and forever on, rest in peace my friend.




By yessenia a 13 year old girl

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Oct 26, 2011
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love it!
by: Lizbeth Rivas

that was real good keep it up =]

Jan 22, 2011
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Nice job:)
by: Animallover635

I like it, I like how you described everything,I saw the picture of it in my head too.Keep up the great work girl!:D

Dec 08, 2010
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poem ?
by: Anonymous

wow i just want to know if this a story or a poem if it is just a poem you should write a story about it don't you think?

Dec 08, 2010
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mmh
by: lala girl

your poems are pretty good but i don't get whats talking about the boy being a gansta her the girl (you)???????? HELP

Dec 07, 2010
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BEST POEM EVER
by: Anonymous

Wow this is one of the most best poem I have ever read. Please Yessenia a 13 year old girl write more so the world can see your art. You have great skills and will make it big one day I know it! Keep writing.

Dec 07, 2010
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WOW
by: Anonymous

this poem should be published with other poems or stories you do i would buy them tell me if you ever publish them!!!!!!!!!1

Dec 07, 2010
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your poem
by: Anonymous

love how you putted it in nice deatiled way and it makes you feel your their.

Dec 07, 2010
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Love this
by: Anonymous

man i love your poem wish could write something like that love it..=D

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